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You are going to read two texts on the historic Angkor site in Cambodia from the field of archaeology.

Version 1 has been written to illustrate the unsuccessful use of evidence.
Roll your mouse over each sentence to see our comments on why the writer’s use of evidence does not present the reader with a convincing academic argument.

Now go to the next page to see Version 2.